Wednesday, November 14, 2007

 

Evolution of a Revolutionary

Today in class we looked at the first four chapters in Evolution of a Revolutionary. This was a review. We skimmed the chapters looking at the themes, the tone and the intent of each chapter and how Guy used certain devices to move the story along. Students received a handout--three part essay form. We then practiced developing thesis sentences using this as a guideline. Homework was to develop a thesis sentence for each chapter (1-5) using this form for minimally 3 of the 5. Students were to bring them to class, but if you desire you can post them here for comment.

Homework is to bring in your introductory paragraphs and conclusions as a part of an outline for the research essay. This does not have to be typed.

Next week your first draft is due. After Thanksgiving the final draft is due. Because the midterms were so lousy, students who didn't do well will have the opportunity to take a final exam to make up. If your essay received lower than a C, you need to revise it. See me before your start. We want to work smart, not hard.

Comments:
Chapter 1

Although Afeni Shakur started her early years in violent turmoil and

uncertainty, she soon came to terms with her past because it contributed to her growth

in time.

Chapter 2

Afeni harbored anger for a large portion of her life. And although it led to her

demise, she was driven by its force because in her mind it gained her respect and

notoriety.

Chapter 3

Although Afeni was often hard on herself, she often discounted the fact that she

was brilliant, strong, and talented because she thought poorly of herself.

Chapter 4

Although Afeni Shakur lacked love for the greater portion of her life, she used her

struggles stemming from physical to drug abuse because it empowered her to substantiate

her life.

Chapter 5

Although Lumumba held the belief that women did not share equal rights in the

Panther movement, Afeni continued to fight for equality because she held a strong

belief in women’s rights.
 
1.Chapter 1
: Although there are many things she had been argue about through her life, Afeni got lesson of acceptance from the things she argueed with because she learned about who the people she argued with came from, the history of them.

2.Chapter 2
: Although her family thought New York as the land of opportunity, the life in New York developed Afeni’s profile as a fighter because it was lonely and hard life without father and relatives.

3.Chapter 3
: Although Black Panther Party enlightened Afeni and gave a direction of her life at first, it dropped the ball and couldn’t sustain Afeni’s belief in the Party because it didn’t have a spiritual base and moral imperative to win revolutions.
 
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