Wednesday, September 24, 2008

 

What are the qualities of good writing?

Freewrite on the qualities of good writing and a good writer. We are not just speaking of essayists, but all types of writers and genres, like poets and poetry, playwrights and plays, directors and screenplays, novelists or short story writers, journalists, nonfiction writers and literary journalism.

Comments:
Some of the qualities i believe that makes a good writter are; knowledge of correct english, getting all the facts of what they are writting about, not just finding information and jotting it down but taking all context into your own interpretation. some writters i think write from the heart and that has to do with feelings. you can't write something about feelings if the feelings you are talking about is not how u feel. in your work i believe you must be honest!
 
A good writer has a broad imagination and knows how to grab the writer’s attention, weather in the title or in the first line or paragraph.
 
Albert, great response. I agree, good writing is passionate. The writer feels his topic or subject. The good writer is honest, and believes what he says is true. If the writer doesn't believe in his words, why should anyone else?
 
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Joshua Brown-James
English 201A 1-2:50pm
September 24, 2008

The qualities of a good writer to me is someone who can persuade someone into believing what they are writing about. A good writer is someone who has confidence in their writing and isn't scared to say whatever is on their mind. They don't mind being judged. They should know what they are talking about whatever the subject may be. A good writer should also be able to take criticism from others on how to improve their writing. These are the qualities I believe a good writer should have.
 
Great Audra, I agree. You literally took the words out of my mouth.
 
Melissa Mah
Professor Sabir
English 201A
1-2:50 PM

The Qualities of Good Writing
In my opinion the qualities of good qualities consists of a clear and concise topic, consistency (like it stays on topic), strong commentary and points, and a strong beginning and ending.
A clear topic is key in writing a good paper; this is because without a clear topic, the paper would not stay on topic. Like the topic of “dogs” is too vague, because there are any species of dogs and it would be easy to get off topic. A better topic would be “English cocker spaniels”. The next step in to determining a good paper is to check if the writer stayed on topic, which is also known as consistency. If the paper stays on topic and consistent, it makes it easier for the reader to understand what the paper is about. The next step is having strong commentary. It is important for the writer to get their opinion out, and by voicing your opinion makes your paper more interesting. The last step in a good writing piece is having a strong introductory and conclusion. This is because if you do not capture the reader’s interest in the first few lines, the reader will be uninterested. It is also essential to have a strong ending; the reader must feel like the paper is done. By incorporating these four qualities can help improve your paper.
 
Sara Yusufi
English 201A
MW 1-2:50
9/24/08

The Qualities of Good Writing
The qualities of a good writer are one who is prepared. A writer must understand their topic in order to have a main point throughout their piece. While writing they must do a few things in order to be ready for a draft. A writer should begin with an outline and doing research to be able to give commentary to the concrete details. By doing so they will have the ability to stay on topic and be focused. The paper should be organized in a manner where the paper has a flow and transitions smoothly from one topic to another.
A good writer must be able to help the reader understand what is going on throughout their whole piece. If they are not able to do so then it will make no sense and confuse the reader. It should have no vague moments and at all times been clear. A writer has to be aware of grammar, punctuation, and other kinds of error. They have to be able to have a title to their paper so that it attracts readers. A good writer needs to have all necessary documents before they start. They could have an outline, research, and maybe a thesaurus to make it interesting.
A good writer should have more than just one draft. By having more than one draft they will be able to fix any error they missed before. And by the time they reach their last draft it should be pretty much perfect. Lastly, a good writer should be able to grab the attention of a reader with a strong introductory paragraph. And they should end it with a well-built conclusion paragraph.
 
Dalena Tran
English 201A
1-2:50 PM

Qualities of good writing must incorporate organization. In order to write a thorough essay, organization provides the readers with a clear image. Sentences must be well organized and structured. The image must must clearly present the topic of the paper. In order to maintain a well organized sentence and paragraph, grammar is also a quality of good writing. Grammar allows an easy flow of sentences and paragraphs, which then begins to create one images at a time.
A quality that would help capture a readers attention would be the topic and topic sentences. The topic must be capturing and contain important issues. In the introduction paragraph, it must incorporate a hook and a thesis. A hook is what captures the readers attention. Hooks provide the readers with a capturing topic and interest. The thesis provides the readers with the important topic/subject of the entire paper.
 
In order to be a good writer in any genre the person must have a creative and open-mind to be able to make it long and good and not boring. The writers must be able to point out the small errors in their own writings and know the purpose of their story. Reading other books and other writings will be the key to expanding the writer’s knowledge and vocabulary and most importantly will expand ideas that others have read or experienced.
 
Writers have the ability to perform thoughts on paper.The art of writing comes from the inner self which consist of a creative mind. There are different forms of writing. Poetry is the most heart felt writing because it's based upon real life issues. A good writer bases his or her material on real life experinces, so the material can have a sense of realistic quality that the audience can relate. Every writer must have a passion for writing to be able to have a sense of expression, not only from the mind, but also from the heart.

-Sameela Smith Eng 201A 1-3PM
 
Renee Dumaguit
Eng201B
1-2:50pm

When reading books, magazines, etc. the thing that catches my attention is the titles. Sometimes, I read the summaries before I read the book. Most of the time, I just read what sounds interesting to me. For example, when I was in high school I did not like reading. I disliked reading because it was boring to me. My 11th grade teacher acknowledged me to read things I was interested in. At first, it was hard for me to find things that caught my attention, but after a long period of time I found that there are many books of my interests. For instance, one of the first books I was interested in reading was “A Child Called ‘It’.” As years went by, I found my interest in reading books that deal with street life and bibliographies about certain artists, athletes, etc. Professor Sabir’s english class interests me because the subjects we are writing about and books that we are reading catches my attetion.
 
Se, that was good because if the book isn't interesting i will put it down. You have to allow good ideas and a way of doing so is having an "open mind".
 
I also agree with Albert and Professor Sabir. Good writing should incorporate passion. Without passion, an image of the writing will not be as strong and interesting to the readers.
Also, like Sara stated, that a good quality in writing must help readers understand the paper. Without that quality, there would be no purpose of a paper; no interest of the audience means no readers.
 
I agree with Sameela. I think that good writing should come from yourself and how you feel about the topic. Incoorporating passion into your writing makes it easier to write, and easier for others to understand.

-Melissa Mah
 
Dalena i agree with you. I think it is important to grab the readers attention with the introduction paragraph. Sentence structure is important because the whole paper is based on it.

-Sara Yusufi
 
Renee Dumaguit
Eng 201B
1-2:50pm

Joshua, I agree with your perspectives on a good writer
 
Lisa Ryan
English 201A
MW 1-2:50

What are the qualities of good writing?

I believe good writing is an art. I believe a good writer approahes their writing as a artist would approach a painting or how a musician creates lyrics. Listed are some other qualities that I feel is an inclusive necessity to gain and maintain good writing:

1.Good writing has a clear thesis/ topic.

2. Grabs the readers attention from the introduction to the end.

3. Good writing is practiced.

4. A good writer is a thinker.

5. Good writing stays on topic.

6. A good writer has a passion for their words.

7. A good writer is a thinker.

8. A good writer enjoys the excitement of writing.
 
I agree with Renee. I think the title really allows a reader to know what they are going to read. And it allows them to know what it might be based on.

-Sara Yusufi
 
To the Anonymous user. a broad imagination is needed to capture great thoughts in a writer's work. If my attention is not grabbed then i will put the book down and go about something else other than reading.
 
Janice Ratcliff
English 201-B
Mon/Wed 1-3


The Qualities of Good Writing

What are some of the writers do to succeed in their writing? A good writer reads books so they can get a good sense of knowledge of how a paper is written.

A good writer will focus on the type of audience they want to write about and stick to that subject. They will have someone read and make corrections of what was written, and while they are reading, they will take notes; a word that is not understandable will be looked-up in the dictionary.

A good writing, are trying to persuade their audience to keep reading, because some books can be very boring.
 
Tiffany Allen
English 201b
Having supporting evidence that catches the readers attention. Every sentance should have some opening point that bulids the writers main idea. Making sure what your writing is isn't dull or boring and not repeating the same words in every sentence. A good writer makes you think as your reading. A good writer has the reader anticepating for whats going to happen next.
 
Renee Dumaguit

Sameela, I agree that poetry is a deeper form of writing
 
Joshua Brown-James

Re: Sameela Smith I believe that you captured what a good writer is I like how u said they had to base it on real life expeirence so it can be realistic and others can relate.
 
Cheyenne Gould
9/24/08
1-2:50 ENGL 201A

What are the qualities of a good writer(s)?
The idea to want to reach out to people and tell them a story is a very good quality to have when you are writing. When the writer makes a strong message in the piece of article, book, essay, or whatever it may be to grab your attention and teach you something is the right way to go. Especially if the author has a great sense of direction such as brainstorming their ideas and know what should come next, is someone who has good perspective on what their reader wants.
 
Joshua Brown-James

Re: Tiffany Allen I agree with your definiton of a good writer I like how you said that they have to make you think as your reading I believe this is a true statement.
 
Vonreesha Jackson
English 201 A
Sept 24 2008


Free write on the qualities of good writing and a good writer? We are not just speaking of essayists, but all types of writers and genres.

Some qualities of good writing and good writers are keeping the reader interested in what there writing about and what the topic is about. Another quality is the quality of the work they are writing and the thought they have put into it. Writing is an art and it’s all about how the writer perceives the information they are writing about. If they can master this quality then there writing should be good. Some other qualities are having a wide range of vocabulary usage. It helps the readers to know and become more familiar with words.
 
RE: Tiffany i agree with you on what you are saying about the author grabing the readers attention.
 
William Johnson
English 201A
1- 2:50pm

A good writer must be able to draw the reader into what ever has been written. Good writing must be well put together and well organized. The writer should have a good sense of what audience he or she wants the material to be for and make it understandable for that group of people. A good writer must be good with the way they use their words and good with their grammar. A good writer must have a good sense of imagination to be able to write about different things other than the same subject all the time. The readers must be able to connect with what the writer has written and be able to relate.
 
I agree with Sameela her comment is phenomenal.

Audra' Tipton
Eglish 201 B
 
Treana Penn
English 201A
1:00-2:50pm

The Qualities of Being a Good Writer

Being a good writer, starts off by writing from the heartc and how you genuinly feel. It is better to start off with a plan, is always the way to go, because you don't just want to jump in cold, it would be rather warm up and not have the reader surprise at what is going on. The problem that I have is getting the main idea across without getting off subject and making the reader confused. To be a good writer, you should be able to answer any questions to any information provided in the paper. Another quality of being a good writer is to have every written word visual as if you are watcing it instead of reading it. A good writer will make you feel as if you are experincing the story first hand.
 
Treana Penn
English 201A
1:00-2:50pm

The Qualities of Being a Good Writer

Being a good writer, starts off by writing from the heartc and how you genuinly feel. It is better to start off with a plan, is always the way to go, because you don't just want to jump in cold, it would be rather warm up and not have the reader surprise at what is going on. The problem that I have is getting the main idea across without getting off subject and making the reader confused. To be a good writer, you should be able to answer any questions to any information provided in the paper. Another quality of being a good writer is to have every written word visual as if you are watcing it instead of reading it. A good writer will make you feel as if you are experincing the story first hand.
 
Kim wilson

The qualities of a good writing and a good writer is someone pulls in the book.
I love book called Black boy but, don’t remember the author name. I t draws from the First sentence. I like those kind of books. They put details in it makes feel like in the book and I think that’s qualities of a good writer.
 
Miloš Bucalo
ENGL 201A
Professor Wanda Sabir

Good question is "What are the qualities of good writing?” .You know it when you see it. It isn’t that hard to tell whether a piece of writing is good or bad. You just have to read it. But things get more challenging if you have to explain why it's good, and more challenging if English is not your first language. Even harder than that is analyzing the good things writer is doing so you can learn to use his or her techniques in your own work.
 
Tiffany you are so right about grabbing the writes attention without that you’re not a good writer!

Audra Tipton
Englsih 201 B
 
Phyllis Washington
Eng 201A
MonWed 1-2:50

Some qualities of a good writer and good writing is, the writer keeps the reader interested in what they are reading. The writing has good points and a meaning. The writing is well structured and well layed out. Good qualities of a writer is they have gotten all the information that they need for their writing. Nothing that they do is out of order. The writer uses correct English and punctuation when they write. A good writer has every necessary part included in the writing.
 
Treana Penn/English 201A

To Lisa Ryan, i agree and relate that the way you write is like painting a portrait and you have to be artistic with your words.
 
Edwin Taitague
English 201A
1-250PM


The Qualities of good writing
I think the qualities of good writing are clear and to the point of what the writer is writing about. I also think spelling and punctuation are also important because that could make a difference in what the reader is trying to get out of what is written. A good writer believes what he/she is writing about is true and has no doubt what they are writing is correct and sufficient. Another thing that comes with good qualities is knowing what you are writing about good research and knowledge of what you are writing about are always good for the reader.
 
Al I agree with you when you say using correct english when writing.

Phyllis Washington
 
Stephanie Yu
English 201A
MW 1-2:50

A good writing should have its thesis in the first paragraph, and then there is couple of body paragraphs, and the last part is the conclusion. The first paragraph tells people what thesis is about the essay, and also, it tells people about the background, what problems relative to the thesis. And the body paragraphs, there must be a topic sentence of each of them. The topic sentence tells people the idea of the paragraph, and then there should be some examples and analyses. Sometimes, there will have some quotes. And the last part, the conclusion, it talks about the thesis again, and it also tells what should people do or what people comprehend from the essay.
A good writer must research lot information about their essay before they start to write, because if a writer doesn’t have enough information, then they don’t know what to write about their idea. And the writer must to think about the idea with their research. And some general questions, a good writer must ask and answer the general questions in their writing, for examples, what, who, where, when, why and how. This is the background about the essay, and these questions tell the reader the basic information. The last thing is a good writer must check the grammar and the spell check, because that might help the readers understand the writer’s writing clearly.
 
I totally agree with Audra as "anonymous" you have the right idea on how writing should be performed. Writing attention grabbing material is very important! I agree.

-Sameela Smith
 
Peter Dominguez
September 24, 2008
English 201B


Qualities of a good writer



I think the qualities of being a good writer is being able to listen and take good notes of what you want to write about. A good writer should be able to know how to write a sentence, paragraph or just know the basic’s in writing. You should be able to spell or at least know how to use spell check on the computer. When writing a paper you should always proof read to make sure your paper makes sense. Writers can grab a pin and let there ideas flow onto there paper but it must fit the MLA format.
 
I like lisas thoughts on what a good writer is I totally agree with it. Especially a good writer is a thinker I really like that
 
i agree with tiffany that having supporting evidence that cathes the readers attention is very important

-william johnson
 
Joshuas thought on a good writer is good. I also agree with the fact that a good writer is someone who speaks there mind.
 
I also agree with Joshua when he says a good writer doesn't mind being judged because they will know what they have to do to get better.

Phyllis Washington
 
Yesra Mobarez
Instructor: Wanda Sabir
09/24/08


What are the qualities of a good writing/good writer?
•Full incite of the individuals mind
•A good note taker
•Someone who owns there words.
•Some who grabs the reader’s attention?
•Gives concrete information.
•Someone who states evidence.
•A good writer is very truthful and passionate about there words.
•Someone who revises corrects mistakes.
•Someone who states the topic.
•Someone who draws outlines and thinks through before writing.
•Some one who gets to the point.
•Someone who is an effective writer.
•Someone who flows with there writing.
•Someone who sketches outlines.
•Someone who has a thesis, intro, body, and conclusions
 
Isaiah Muhammad
Professor Sabir
English 201-b
09/24/2008
What are the qualities of a good writer?
In my opinion the qualities of a good writer fall down into three categories: Imagination to give you a world to envision and utilize, Innovation to give your world form, and aspects that are both light and dark to give it emotion. Imagination is important because it allows a person to create and gather their feelings into one place so that they can be used in their story. Innovation is second most important because it lets you in a sense translate your imagination into words so that everyone can understand and identify with you on what your writing. Then the last piece is aspects of light and dark to make your story have some feeling into it whether it be excited, depressed, happy, sad, joyful, mournful, etc.
 
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Jamila Brown
English 201A
1-2:50PM
Freewrite




I’m not a great writer, so I think it’s pretty difficult to give my opinion on another individuals writing, but I’ll do my best! I think that good writing comes from someone who has a vivid imagination and can capture the readers’ attention regardless of the person’s preferable genre. The topic of the story should be unfamiliar to keep the readers’ attention and to make them want to move forward with their readings. Mystery and suspense shouldn’t be the only thing that keeps you going, and who doesn’t love drama? Although I’m not a frequent reader I still like to read and I have a wide preference for my genre. Many writers that I’ve come across has a series of novels with the same characters with a new face here and there, but that type of reading is fun only to an extent; change is good in my opinion.
 
Yesra Mobarez
09/24/08
Response To:Treana Penn

I like that you stated that a writer needs to write from the heart and that any one reading a story/ essay should feel like there expierincing the essay. That kind of information was realy helpful. Thank you.
 
Sameela you're a perfect example of a great writer! Your writing clearly explains what and how you are feeling about what goes on around you. You are a naturalist when it comes to writing.
 
Sameela you're a perfect example of a great writer! Your writing clearly explains what and how you are feeling about what goes on around you. When it comes to writing you are a naturalist.
 
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Tariq Hamid
MW 1-250

From my idea a good writer is someone who has confidence in their writing, great character development. Good dialogue. A complete and compelling story article, Meaningful theme, good use of metaphor; Description Readers need to know where they are and what's going on in the story, explaining and making the story interesting and easy for readers to understand and enjoy whether if it’s a book, essay or a story.
 
Morwaried Kheri
M W 1:00-3:00

The qualities of a good writer to me is, when a good writer knows exactly what they are talking about, and have great examples to back it up. When they also have good knowledge of what they are trying to say. Correct grammar has a big role on it also. There are many things that can be said, but in the write way. Having on going sentence can be a flaw, the reader can easily get confused. It is very easy to write on something, but if it has no meaning, then it defises the whole purpose.
 
I guess a good writer is anyone who understands music. Writing is music. Music itself is unique in that it's more than just sounds in the same way that writing is more than just words. Music is more of a place than it is a sound. Its more a question of where does it take you to than how does it sound. Writing is the same way.
 
Andrew Nguyen
English 201A
8-8:50

A good writer has to somehow grab the readers' attention. Nowadays, anything that looks good from the cover attracts the person. Like the saying "Don't judge a book by it's cover", a good book can have the simplest title, and the simplest illustration, but that does not mean that it is not a good book. Read the summary, if it grabs you, give it a chance. For poetry, poetry does not have to stick to any format. Poetry is the expression of the person. If the poet shows any emotion in the piece, it's, in my opinion, worth the read or listen to. Journalists should not be biased. Journalists should gather both sides of the story, to get a broader view of the situation. If there are no arguments on the opposite side, how do you know the truth?
 
I think Mo is wrong. Good writing with bad gramar is always supperior to bad writing w/ good grammar.
 
Andrew Nguyen
English 201A
8-8:50

RE: Joshua Brown-James

I agree with confidence. Why does a writer have to be afraid of expressing one's thoughts to others? Also, criticism is a good source of growing. From criticism, the writer could expand on writing techniques and cover up weaknesses of their own.
 
Lou Saechao
09/25/08
eng.201A

the qualities of a good write would be the essence of how well organize and well written to tell a good story,tales, and etc.the way i think that would work is to us of a perfect grammer and a well understood of the reader could read.
 
mike saepharn
english 201A
8-8:50

my aspects of good writing is to get in the right mind set and know what is is that you're writing about. doing a good amount of research on the subject topic, even if you feel that you know just about everything on it. to get into the mood of what you're writing about, and feel the flow and the rhythm to it. what i mean by that is, again relating to what i had said at first, to know what your talking or writing about. another important thing is to have interest in what you are writing about. because you cant write about something that bores you, if you do then that just makes your piece of writing boring. this is what i think good qualities of writing is.
 
I think the qualities of a good writer is someone who can express what their thinking through writing.

Jaliyah
Eng. 201A/B
8-8:50
 
Erica Mitchell english 201a 8-850am

Good writting is when a writer explains in real good detail. When hyou can picture everything like you are there. A writer get the readers attention where they keep you wanting to know more. You have to capture your readers.You have to feel what you are writting.
 
To me the qualities of a good writer are one can express a complete thought through writing. The information that you write about any one can understand just as if you were having a verbal conversation.
 
9/25/08:English 201A 8-9 class
Qualities of a good writer having the ability to express your ideas or characters in a way that your audience meaning the reader can relate to your thought or
gesture.
 
In my opinion a good writer is someone who can do all types of writing . A person who can write music peoms all types of essays that makes a good writer. Tupac is a perfect example of a good writer. he wrote music, peoms and many books. A good writer should put thier soul into their writing and thats what makes a good writer in my opinion.

Julian Pete
english 201A
8:00-8:50
 
A good writter in my opinion are people who have minimum grammar error on their paper. Also, knowing what they are talking about, the story would go smoothly through out their paper. A good writter story won't be as chopping, like jumping all over the place in their story. In the end their paper will flow like a river stream when you read it.
 
Mike Saepharn
English 201A
8-8:50

RE: andrew nguyen
i agree with what you are trying to say. because right now, people really do just buy a book just because of the cover. i surely do that.
 
Dion Cade
Good writing

A quality of good writing is writing that is understandable and is able to relate to the reader. A good writer is a writer that is able to think fast and not think too hard about the writing. If the person is thinking too deeply about what to say on the next line, then it probably might lose the reader. A more relaxed writer of course has better writing and is able to draw the reader and keep them interested.
 
Dion Cade
Good writing

A quality of good writing is writing that is understandable and is able to relate to the reader. A good writer is a writer that is able to think fast and not think too hard about the writing. If the person is thinking too deeply about what to say on the next line, then it probably might lose the reader. A more relaxed writer of course has better writing and is able to draw the reader and keep them interested.
 
09/25/08 English 201A
I think that one good qualitie of a good writer is exploring. Finding and getting as much information as you can and trying to put all of the information that you get into you writing. All the information that you get,I think would really help your writing.
 
I agree with San in saying that the writer should know what they are talking about and to make sure that their story doesn't jump all over the place and flow smoothly.
 
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Nina Wooten
Eng. 201B
8-8:50

When a writer has good qualities, your imagination is put to work. Your visuals come to life. A good writer is able to persuade your opinion and sometimes your thoughts. The context is very clear and straight to the point.when a writer is really good, they take creativity to the next level and open your horizon of what you originally thought writing was all about. A great write will make a non-reader, read.
 
Nina Wooten
Eng. 201B
8-8:50

Response to Erica Mitchell:
Erica mentioned one important factor that I forgot to mention, but think is a great quality of a good writer. Being able to keep the reader interested is one of the most important things for a write to do. Sometimes in not interested if the book isn't a page turner or I can't visualize the image the write is trying to impose.
 
Dung Nguyen
English 201A
8.00-8.50


A good writing is a writing with a main idea that let's the readers understood and know what are they reading about. a good writing also has good thesis, storyline, and main subject. you can't put anything in a story that doesnt make sense becauseanyone can do that. you need to connect this sentence to another sentence, this paragraph to another paragraph. the topic sentence of every paragraph has to point out what is this paragraph about. a good writing also has to be organize.
 
Brittany Houston
English 201a
8:00-8:50

A good writer in my opinion is a person who isn’t afraid to write what they think or feel. That also comes with good grammar and punctuation skills. A good writer can take any subject and write a whole paper about it with a lot of details and very little grammar errors.
 
A good writer has a broad imagination and knows how to grab the writer’s attention, weather in the title or in the first line or paragraph.

Tipton
English 201 B
 
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Francisco Marcial
English 201A
MW 1-2:50pm

I believe that the qualities of agood writer are spelling and most importantly knowledge. I think that a good writer is someone that doesn't have a lot of mistakes on their spelling because everyone makes mistakes. Someone that uses knowledge on their writing for example using new vocab words that most people don't know. I also belive that a good writer is someone that writes about what they believe and is passionate about what the are writing. If the writer is able to pursue you by his writing then that is a very good writer.
 
Franciso Marcial
English 201A
MW 1-2:50pm

i agree with what albert said. A good writer has to put passion and feelings into their writing. If it doesn't have any of these things, then your writing is not going to be strong.
 
I agree with Audra because in order to creating a successful paper details and imagery have to be included.

-Sameela Smith ENG.201A
 
Renee D.
Eng 201B
1pm

Melissa, your paragraph is very detailed about what a the qualities of a good writer should have. I, also, agree that those four qualities can help improve our papers.
 
Lisa ryan
English 201A
MW 1-2:50

Joshua,
I like your view on the qualities of a good writer. A good writer should have confidence and believe that there is always room for improvement.
 
Lisa Ryan
English 201A
MW 1-2:50

Dalena,

I agree that a hook is very important. The hook is what I look for when I read because it draws you in and makes you want more.
 
bethlehem biru
8/25/10
eng 1A


the movie talks aboutracism and white people talk about racism and white benefits them from the system.other white people try to make a change and to come out of the white space and changed the racism.many of the whites feel guilty of the fact that they are not racism and want want to do something to feel good about themselves.
they had a little play in the movie and shows how people of colors was in pain and all the hurts they were going through because of their whites.
 
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