Wednesday, October 14, 2009
Presentations: Afternoon Class
Please write a response to your classmate's scene. Comment on the writer's grasp of key ideas and concepts presented in the chapter. Comment on the writing and performance. Be constructive. Add to the discussion something the presenter did not choose to highlight.
Each response needs to be specific to the writer. You will write a separate comment for each writer.
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Mary Perez
English 201b
Oct. 14, 2009
For the Monday presentation we saw Rhonda Washington present her skit. Her play was about Afeni and Tupac meeting at his place to discuss further about their relationship. However, Afeni admits and faces her addiction problem to drugs and tupac recites a poem to her wrote by him. This scene takes place in the 1990s. The way she incorporated the poem into the skit was perfect because it fit in so well with the theme.
English 201b
Oct. 14, 2009
For the Monday presentation we saw Rhonda Washington present her skit. Her play was about Afeni and Tupac meeting at his place to discuss further about their relationship. However, Afeni admits and faces her addiction problem to drugs and tupac recites a poem to her wrote by him. This scene takes place in the 1990s. The way she incorporated the poem into the skit was perfect because it fit in so well with the theme.
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Rhonda Washingon
English 201A
14 October, 2009
Intro for Kelley Yuen and Jimmy Sengthavilay: I thought they did a good job of rephrasing the introduction. I also liked the play that they wrote. The way they acted out the club seen was good to.
English 201A
14 October, 2009
Intro for Kelley Yuen and Jimmy Sengthavilay: I thought they did a good job of rephrasing the introduction. I also liked the play that they wrote. The way they acted out the club seen was good to.
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Renelle Cullors
English 201a
Professor Sabir
14 October 2009
Intro- Kelley Yuen
It was good everything she asked for they did in there play. They did it as it was an interview with Warren G and asked them about Tupac and there relationship with hi.
Chapter 1- Rhonda
Afeni and Tupac at the house while they talked about how Tupac mom wasn’t there for him. She talked about how she was so sorry and she was going to change. Very good with good actress.
English 201a
Professor Sabir
14 October 2009
Intro- Kelley Yuen
It was good everything she asked for they did in there play. They did it as it was an interview with Warren G and asked them about Tupac and there relationship with hi.
Chapter 1- Rhonda
Afeni and Tupac at the house while they talked about how Tupac mom wasn’t there for him. She talked about how she was so sorry and she was going to change. Very good with good actress.
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Julianne Bauer
Professor Sabir
English 201B
14 October 2009
Today presentation we saw Kelly,Jimmy,Lou and Ramon. Their play was the intro of the book Holler if you hear me. I thought that did a good job doing their skit.
Rhonda did her skit about Afeni and her relationship with her son about her drug problem.
Katherine I liked her presentation too.
Professor Sabir
English 201B
14 October 2009
Today presentation we saw Kelly,Jimmy,Lou and Ramon. Their play was the intro of the book Holler if you hear me. I thought that did a good job doing their skit.
Rhonda did her skit about Afeni and her relationship with her son about her drug problem.
Katherine I liked her presentation too.
# posted by : 2:50 PM
: 2:50 PM
Lou Saechao
English 201A
MW1-2:50pm
Chapter 1: well presented of the skit. there play was good and well showin'. it was by Rhonda Washington and have help from Katherine Adam. there ideal between Topac and her mama, Akira, talking about the changes that Akira can do to make Pac trust her and love her again..
Chapter 7: it was perform by Katherine Adam herself with raps and peom. intense and well spoken. wasn't ready but very prepare to do what she needs to do to preset her stuff.
English 201A
MW1-2:50pm
Chapter 1: well presented of the skit. there play was good and well showin'. it was by Rhonda Washington and have help from Katherine Adam. there ideal between Topac and her mama, Akira, talking about the changes that Akira can do to make Pac trust her and love her again..
Chapter 7: it was perform by Katherine Adam herself with raps and peom. intense and well spoken. wasn't ready but very prepare to do what she needs to do to preset her stuff.
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: 2:51 PM
Jimmy Sengthavilay
Professor Sabir
English 201A
1-2:50PM MW
Comment on presentation “Holler if you hear me” By Dysons
Chapter 1
I like the way Tupac character was played in from of the class, with emotion. I felt like I was in a theater. Both where excellence. DEAR MAMA Song WAS EXCELLENCE
Chapter 7
Excellence information detail. Touching poem. Woah. “Boss my clit” I don’t think anyone should be disrespected by anyone.
Professor Sabir
English 201A
1-2:50PM MW
Comment on presentation “Holler if you hear me” By Dysons
Chapter 1
I like the way Tupac character was played in from of the class, with emotion. I felt like I was in a theater. Both where excellence. DEAR MAMA Song WAS EXCELLENCE
Chapter 7
Excellence information detail. Touching poem. Woah. “Boss my clit” I don’t think anyone should be disrespected by anyone.
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: 6:00 PM
Kathleen Adams
Professor Sabir
English 201A/B
October 14, 2009
Presentations
Today in class, I thought the skits were excellent. The first one with Kelly and her crew was cool; because you had different ethnicities, portraying some of Tupac’s friends, such as Warren G. The script was very detailed, and was tastefully written. All four did a wonderful job. Would someone like to write a script for me?
Rhonda wrote a moving skit about Tupac having a heart felt conversation with his mother. I enjoyed reading the part of Tupac. Any time you need an actress call me!
In reference to my skit, it was about the disrespect that some men show to women by calling them Bitches. I often hear young females tell each other that, and I tell them, "you are too beautiful to talk like that." About the rap, Too Short is known for calling women bitches all the time. Since the chapter spoke about such issues, I felt I had to speak on it: My second husband for eight years, one day he slip-up and called me a bitch. I hit him up side his head with cast iron skillet. He had to have fifteen stitches. The police told him he had no right to disrespect me when he already knew the consequences. I have gone to therapy, and I am continuously working on my thoughts before acting.
B =- Babe
I -= In
T =- Total
C =- Control of
H =- Herself
Professor Sabir
English 201A/B
October 14, 2009
Presentations
Today in class, I thought the skits were excellent. The first one with Kelly and her crew was cool; because you had different ethnicities, portraying some of Tupac’s friends, such as Warren G. The script was very detailed, and was tastefully written. All four did a wonderful job. Would someone like to write a script for me?
Rhonda wrote a moving skit about Tupac having a heart felt conversation with his mother. I enjoyed reading the part of Tupac. Any time you need an actress call me!
In reference to my skit, it was about the disrespect that some men show to women by calling them Bitches. I often hear young females tell each other that, and I tell them, "you are too beautiful to talk like that." About the rap, Too Short is known for calling women bitches all the time. Since the chapter spoke about such issues, I felt I had to speak on it: My second husband for eight years, one day he slip-up and called me a bitch. I hit him up side his head with cast iron skillet. He had to have fifteen stitches. The police told him he had no right to disrespect me when he already knew the consequences. I have gone to therapy, and I am continuously working on my thoughts before acting.
B =- Babe
I -= In
T =- Total
C =- Control of
H =- Herself
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: 9:10 PM
Kholood Gaid
English 201A 1-3pm
October 16, 2009
On Wednesday, I saw three presentation from the book "Holler If You Hear" in class. I thought they all did great. I loved the presentation of Rhonda, i think it was very touching about Tupac and his mother, Afeni. Also Katherine did a great job, momorizing her poem and how well she present it.
English 201A 1-3pm
October 16, 2009
On Wednesday, I saw three presentation from the book "Holler If You Hear" in class. I thought they all did great. I loved the presentation of Rhonda, i think it was very touching about Tupac and his mother, Afeni. Also Katherine did a great job, momorizing her poem and how well she present it.
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: 11:05 PM
Gilbert Canlas
English 201A
17 October 2009
Kelley's intro was good, the 3 boys she was with were good also, their scene was good, accurate. They song they picked was good also.
Chapter 1 Rhonda's scene about Afeni and Tupac was also good. The one playing as Tupac was funny! the scene was detailed.
Chapter 7 Katherine Adam's scene was really good, i like the rap she made especially for the scene she's reporting.
English 201A
17 October 2009
Kelley's intro was good, the 3 boys she was with were good also, their scene was good, accurate. They song they picked was good also.
Chapter 1 Rhonda's scene about Afeni and Tupac was also good. The one playing as Tupac was funny! the scene was detailed.
Chapter 7 Katherine Adam's scene was really good, i like the rap she made especially for the scene she's reporting.
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: 1:13 PM 
Kelley Yuen
Professor Sabir
English 201B
MW 1-250pm
Chapter 1: Rhonda Washington, Kathleen Adams
The performance was nice and had acted with emotion. The scene was interesting and fun to watch. I like how the song came right on after the play. I like how Tupac wanted to know how would his mother change and start to be there for him. The song relate to the scene, it talks about even though his mother is not there for him all the time, he still love her with all his heart.
Chapter 4: Kholood
This skit was really organized detailed. Even though they wasn’t ready to play their song or find a poem that relate to the skit, but overall their acting was good.
Chapter 4: Lou, and Ramon
Their scene was about a talk show. This talks about how their life, and how they see their community. Even though it was not that organize. The content of their script was good. That was a detailed script, but need to organize for people to know what to read. The poem they choose had related to their scene. It talks about follow your heart, not what you see around.
Chapter 7: Kathleen Adams
The poem that Kathleen had written is about how you don’t let any man to call your names, and don’t let them disrespect any female. Kathleen did a rap, it was short but it talks about the chapter she is doing the skit on.
Epilogue: Julianne
This skit has two parts to it. The first scene talks about where they went to Elephant Bar to eat dinner, and had talked about Tupac was faking his death and living in a nice relax place.
The second scene was after hearing the song “Me against the World” at the restaurant; they all went back to Snoop Dog’s house. Snoop Dog had read one of Tupac’s poems; the title of the poem is “Sometime I Cry.” The scene was short, but I like how the poem was added into the scene. That was a really nice skit; it really shows how much people really missed Tupac after such a long time.
Professor Sabir
English 201B
MW 1-250pm
Chapter 1: Rhonda Washington, Kathleen Adams
The performance was nice and had acted with emotion. The scene was interesting and fun to watch. I like how the song came right on after the play. I like how Tupac wanted to know how would his mother change and start to be there for him. The song relate to the scene, it talks about even though his mother is not there for him all the time, he still love her with all his heart.
Chapter 4: Kholood
This skit was really organized detailed. Even though they wasn’t ready to play their song or find a poem that relate to the skit, but overall their acting was good.
Chapter 4: Lou, and Ramon
Their scene was about a talk show. This talks about how their life, and how they see their community. Even though it was not that organize. The content of their script was good. That was a detailed script, but need to organize for people to know what to read. The poem they choose had related to their scene. It talks about follow your heart, not what you see around.
Chapter 7: Kathleen Adams
The poem that Kathleen had written is about how you don’t let any man to call your names, and don’t let them disrespect any female. Kathleen did a rap, it was short but it talks about the chapter she is doing the skit on.
Epilogue: Julianne
This skit has two parts to it. The first scene talks about where they went to Elephant Bar to eat dinner, and had talked about Tupac was faking his death and living in a nice relax place.
The second scene was after hearing the song “Me against the World” at the restaurant; they all went back to Snoop Dog’s house. Snoop Dog had read one of Tupac’s poems; the title of the poem is “Sometime I Cry.” The scene was short, but I like how the poem was added into the scene. That was a really nice skit; it really shows how much people really missed Tupac after such a long time.
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: 2:10 AM
Julianne Bauer
English 201B
23 October 2009
Chapter 4
I liked Kholood skit, she knew what she wanted to do in her skit.
Chapter 4
In Lou and Ramon chapter, their skit was a T.V. talk show. It was ok, I thought they should of practice more with their skit.
English 201B
23 October 2009
Chapter 4
I liked Kholood skit, she knew what she wanted to do in her skit.
Chapter 4
In Lou and Ramon chapter, their skit was a T.V. talk show. It was ok, I thought they should of practice more with their skit.
# posted by : 9:02 PM
: 9:02 PM
Saturday, October 24, 2009
I thought that every one's effort and participation was great. This assignment was a little challenging and fun at the same time. It was great to see the students working together as teams. I thought that everyone did a great job.
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I thought that every one's effort and participation was great. This assignment was a little challenging and fun at the same time. It was great to see the students working together as teams. I thought that everyone did a great job.
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